| Page | Paragraph | Suggestion |
| 137 | 2nd new | 'may also be contributed' s/b 'may also be attributed'. |
| 140 | 1st | 'spices' s/b 'species'. |
| 143 | 3rd | 'desperate' s/b 'disparate' |
| 165 | 1st new | '…Shiraz, he…' is two sentences connected by a comma. Adding a 'when' to the first would fix this. |
| 194 | 1st in new section | S/b either 'were still fresh' or 'remained' but not both. |
| 208 | 1st partial | 'sexually' s/b 'sexual' |
| 262 | 1st | Should choose between a list within a clause and two clauses: The first part of 'mix of…and…was untouched…' anticipates a list and gives one item, but the second part is part of an independent clause. |
| 271 | last | 'landowners…turned into' s/b 'landowners…turned to'. |
| 307 | 1st partial | '…from the Iranian growers soon found' s/b '…from the Iranian growers who soon found'. |
| 313 | 1st full | 'see fig. 5.17' refers to a photo about Mirza Hasan Shirazi rather than to the paragraph's subject of the private life of Naser al-Din. |
| 315 | 1st | 'who rebuked…, warned that the Iranian nation under the aegis of the deserved justice and public security, and called…' S/b something after 'aegis of'. |
| 329 | 1st full | The sense s/b reversed: 'enhance their public image as disseminators of heresy'. |
| 334 | 1st full | '(as it pronounced…' s/b 'as it is pronounced…' or something similar. |
| 354 | 1st full | 'The so-called Markaz-e Ghaybi…founded by' s/b 'The so-called Markaz-e Ghaybi…was founded' or some similar change. |
| 355 | 1st full | 'for value of constitutionalism' s/b 'for the value of constitutionalism'. |
| 361 | 1st partial | 'as if a scheme to destroy this delicate chance already lurking in the back of diplomats' minds' s/b 'as if a scheme to destroy this delicate chance was already lurking in the back of diplomats' minds'. |
| 381 | 1st full | 'found in musing' s/b either 'found in the musing' or 'found in musings'. |
| 404 | 1st full | 'As in neighboring Republic of Turkey' s/b 'As in the neighboring Republic of Turkey'. |
| 406 | 1st full | 'Almost unanimous opposition to the agreement—which…—expressed by the …press' s/b 'Almost unanimous opposition to the agreement—which…—was expressed by the…press'. |
| 432 | 1st full | 'clocks and turbans' probably s/b 'cloaks and turbans'. |
| 435 | Translated verse | 'O Damavand!... Rise… And blow…, Send…, Rain…, Destroy…, Tore apart…' Probably s/b 'Tear apart…' instead of 'Tore apart…'. |
| 437 | 2nd | 'with a strong anti-Bolshevik credentials'. Should either omit 'a' or change 'credentials'. |
| 441 | 1st of new section | “Also known as 'Arabestan, in the Qajar era, Khuzestan was…”. Probably should omit one comma. |
| 468 | 1st full | 'adapt to the realities of a changing society with a short period of two decades.'. Probably should be 'within a short period' |
| 475 | 2nd full | 'Pioneered by intellectuals of the constitutional period, found in scholarship…'. S/b 'period, they found' or some other change to make one of the clauses independent. |
| 480 | 1st full | 'in attention to ancient Iranian past.' S/b 'to the ancient'. |
| 480 | Last partial | 'made the Iranian nationalist narrative to gradually trickle down to the level…' Probably should omit the first 'to'. |
| 503 | First full | 'pluralism facilitated' s/b 'pluralism was facilitated'. |
| 506 | Last partial | 'The new climate also encouraged chief of powerful tribes'. 'chief' s/b 'chiefs'. |
| 509 | 1st full | 'a Tudeh-inspired crowd attacking the Majles and looted public buildings'. S/b either 'attacked' or 'Majles, looted'. |
| 514 | 1st of new section | 'were convinced that Azerbaijan's secession is a prelude'. S/b 'was a prelude'. |
| 517 | 1st partial | 'grater' s/b 'greater'. |
| 524 | 3rd | 'ides' s/b 'idea'. |
| 540 | 1st partial | 'Fada'iyan-e-e' s/b 'Fada'iyan-e'. |
| 626 | 1st | 'networks around the member of the royal family': 'member' s/b 'members'. |
| 634 | 2nd full | 'A population exceeding one hundred thousand scattered throughout Iran.': 'thousand scattered' s/b 'thousand was scattered'. |
| 636 | 2nd full | 'Eilat on the Mediterranean': 'Mediterranean' s/b 'Red Sea'. |
| 641 | 3rd | "Saddam's hostile move against its Shi'i poopulation--especially against a community of Iranian descent who...century.": needs a verb. |
| 649 | 1st of new section | 'and the arbitrary means of materialize it.': 'of materialize' s/b either 'to materialize' or 'of materializing'. |
| 659 | 1st full | 'and other dormant cessation tendencies.': 'cessation' s/b something else, perhaps 'secession'. |
| 675 | 1st of new section | 'message of dissident' s/b 'message of dissent'. |
| 687 | 1st of new section | 'in distant past' s/b 'in the distant past.' |
| 712 | 1st partial | 'to assuage the royal mind and assuring the shah': 'assuring' s/b 'assure'. |
| 722 | last | 'The proactive wing...backed Ardeshir Zahedi...were convinced....' 'were convinced' s/b 'who was convinced' [if Zahedi was meant] or 'and was convinced' [if the wing was meant]. |
| 749 | 2nd extended quote | 'he would just follow ([Taqlid] a jurists)': 'jurists)' s/b 'jurist)'. Cf. the next sentence. |
| 754 | 1st full | 'for it allowed them access audiences': 'them access' s/b 'them to access'. |
| 754 | 2nd full | 'adherent to liberal nationalism of the National Movement': 'to liberal' s/b 'to the liberal'. |
| 756 | 1st full | 'grater' s/b 'greater'. |
| 757 | 1st full | 'of that era anti-Baha'i campaign': 'era anti-Baha'i' s/b 'era the anti-Baha'i' or 'era his anti-Baha'i'. |
| 757 | extended quote | 'is such manner that' s/b 'in such a manner that'. |
| 761 | 1st partial | 'who objected his' s/b 'who objected to his'. |
| 761 | 1st full | 'whose impression of Khamenei's world-view': 'of' s/b 'on'. |
| 772 | last | 'Islam'il I' s/b 'Isma'il I'. |
| 786 | last | 'While the same article recognizing Sunni schools of Islamic law, article 13...': 'recognizing' s/b 'recognized' or 'that recognized'. |
| 787 | 2nd full | 'where women primarily recognized as reproductive entities.': 'women primarily' s/b 'women were primarily'. |
| 807 | last | 'a club-wielding mob readily assigned' s/b 'a club-wielding mob was readily assigned'. |
| 810 | 1st full | 'that either brought into silence': 'that either brought' s/b 'that were either brought'. |
| 824 | 1st partial | 'to "a city of hundred mayors" and': perhaps '"...of hundred..."' s/b '"...of a hundred..."'. |
| 825 | 2nd full | 'Not only they were' s/b either 'Not only were they' or 'It was not only that they were'. |
| 829 | 2nd full | 'Made these centers inseparable part': 'centers inseparable part' s/b either 'centers an inseparable part' or 'centers inseparable parts'. |
| 830 | 2nd full | 'reaffirmed Iranian hegemony of the Pahlavi era.': 'reaffirmed Iranian hegemony' probably s/b 'reaffirmed the Iranian hegemony'. |
| 830 | 3rd full | 'Besides Khorramshahr incident' probably s/b 'Besides the Korramshahr incident'. |
| 838 | 1st partial | 'with a messianic undertones' s/b either 'with messianic undertones or 'with a messianic undertone'. |
| 849 | extended quote | '"callous" s/b '"challice"'. Cf pg. 848, 2nd full paragraph. |
| 862 | last partial | 'has kept' probably s/b 'had kept'. |
| 887 | first full | 'even of great poets...such as...(b. 1939) making great poetry.': '(b. 1939) making' s/b different, perhaps '(b. 1939) were making'. |
| 893 | first partial | 'integrity. Having.' s/b '...integrity, having'. |
| 899 | first full | 'sessions' probably s/b 'secessions'. |
| 905 | first full | 'crated' s/b 'created'. |
| 907 | last partial | 'sustainable, horticulture,' s/b 'sustainable horticulture,'. |